After our presentation on our idea we were given feedback on our film. We had to make changes, and we did this parallel to the development of our idea.

Teacher Feedback- 29/01/2013

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Improvements to be made:

• Our USP needs to be changed to the conflict between the two survival group rather the initial idea to focus solely on one of the survival groups.
• Work on our secondary audience and clearly state and include the appropriate elements to appeal to both genders and fans of the genre. 
• Do research on zombie make-up and special effects such as muzzle flashes, body shots and exploding head. 
• Gain a better understanding on titles and provide evidence. 

Positive comments:

• Good research and planning on locations for the film. 
• Clear demonstration of research on films which influenced. 
• Good presentation and roles well distributed within the group.